Reviews for Precarious
nickyO chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
This is a good analogy, bringing in nature with the old saying of 'hanging by a thread', and the end question hits. Good job.
Peace Flower chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I like this and I am a fan of haiku myself. I remember once reading that haiku should be inspirational and natural. This isn't exactly. But, I don't think that always has to be the case. :)