I vote for russell

now I feel bad for Austin as well! though I still like Nora and Russell together. Kind of feel like Austin only wants Nora because it's convenient as she already lives with him

lol...tom is funny

tom seems to be going a little overboard - but I'm sure it will be funny to watch

would have liked to see a bit more of Russell and nora

: ( I don't like Russel. He seems too manipulative. I like Austin. But I like Tom better. I wanted home and Nara to be together in the beginning... Good story, keep it up.

hey love the story. good characters. amazing idea, however you really need to work on wording and flow. there was one sentance where you said the word lips so many times that i gave up half way through and skipped a few lines. also check your words if you are unsure of what they mean. Synonym is the word you were looking for in the last chapter. an acronym is a word made of letters that represent other words. (that was poorly explained on my part sorry) but like NASA- it stands for National Aeronautics and Space Administration. good story, and keep writing, but just take some more time to read over your chapters and editing them before posting, yeah?

ugh soo torn between who I want her to end up with

WOW i can't believe you updated...but it was so short! No more Russ (im adopting that nickname for him too), aw man!

what a dilemma who is she going to choose?

I really hope Nara and Austin get together and not Russel :(

I rather her be a step mom for May

i'm sure the prank will be funny but am more interested in what happens with Russell and nara now.

set him with a glare. This wasn't fare.

fare should be spelled fair

I dont know if I like her being interested in both men, makes her affections for either seem fickle.

woho! Nara!

yay russell - austin's a loser prat. curious to see what dean comes up with

It's quiet and peaceful. I like it her

missing an e to have it be "I like it here"

Great job!