Reviews for If This Isn't Nice
Isca chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
"I wake up to find the world just as I left it." This is a lovely opening line - it immediately captivates the reader.

"Both of us listening to the soft swishing sigh of the rain outdoors and letting the quiet green envelop us." This is my favourite part. The 'sigh of the rain' and 'the quiet green envelop us' lines in particular; they're so moving! :)

The repetition of "If this isn't nice, I don't know what is" ties the piece together nicely.