|Reviews for Downfall|
| rozalicious678 chapter 32 . 9/1/2014
I loved this story!
And Im desperately waiting for the epilogue and the sequel!
Please please please HURRY!
| literary.double chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
You told me not to come read these, which sounds to me like an invitation to do JUST THAT! This is so interesting! I'm about to head out to work but I just finished up this chapter and was NOT AT ALL expecting the story to be about Oracles and goddesses and gods of death! This is awesome! Super original. You told me not to but I'll definitely be reading more. It's a super creative idea, and one you're obviously passionate about! Don't get rid of these! Keep hammering away :)
| E.Nelson chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
So far, I really like this story :) I like your style of writing too. As soon as I finish this, I'll be checking out your other story!
| GrimIsaac chapter 32 . 3/28/2013
great book, but fyi it feels a tad choppy
| bookppl93 chapter 32 . 3/4/2013
Such a cute ending c: I really loved this story and I hope you post a sequel soon -
| mylittlePRINCESS chapter 32 . 2/27/2013
| Alaeryel chapter 32 . 2/25/2013
OMG Cass-I CANNOT BELIEVE this is the end of the story besides the epilogue! I cried here and especially for Yuri-god I don't think my heart will recoup from his pain! I would like to see Yuri happy again tho and I think Helena telling him about Adrian helped him I know he still felt the loss and pain of it.
I will definitely be watching and waiting for the sequel no matter how long it may take you-I WILL BE HERE!
| Brightyellow chapter 32 . 2/24/2013
Too much to login, sorry about that.
But your descriptions were amazing. The writing of your noticible has gotten better throught the story. And also, honeslty it was a random ending. The sad thing is your story was predictable, i'm not saying that is bad im saying that it was obvious. But, i did stick by, and i do like the ending. You did a great job. You didnt do it for the reviews you did it for yourself, youre improving your writing and i hope you'll keep postin whenever. Just take a break from all this writing.
| William Kayspear chapter 31 . 2/4/2013
How about Adam? I kinda like that name. ... I feel sad that the story is almost over... time just flew by...(hurry & update)
| KitKat chapter 31 . 2/2/2013
What about the names
Jacob nicknames:Jake, Jakey
William nicknames:Will, Willy, Liam
Eddison nicknames:Eddie, Edd
Robert nicknames:Rob, Robbie
(Sorry could not think of any last names.)
| mylittleprincess chapter 31 . 2/2/2013
yay he is alive! please updste soon.
| Alaeryel chapter 31 . 2/2/2013
YAY-HE LIVED! I have been sitting here and DYING to know if Jack lived or died and how Helena would handle it-ONE OF THE MOST EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTERS YET! I cannot believe one more chapter left and the story is over-NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Ah well-ALL GOOD THINGS MUST COME TO AN END! I want to see Yuri atleast somewhat happy but I don't know how that will happen with one chapter left but that is just the way of things.
I also have a name to suggest but it isn't all that unique tho it is still not common atleast around here: Gaelen. Trying to think of more and if come up with anything else before hand I will send it your way via pm. I can't wait to read it.
| bookppl93 chapter 31 . 2/2/2013
Too cute and maybe Roger Wedders :/ idk
| William Kayspear chapter 30 . 1/5/2013
Gods and goddesses! I love greek mythology, but this, this is better. I'm crying my eyes out! You have to hurry and post the next chapter! I must know what happens!
| Alaeryel chapter 30 . 12/23/2012
SH**, HELL and DAMNATION Cass-this was OVER THE TOP FANTASTIC! When she saw Adrian and her father and everyone else-IT MADE ME BAWL! She was BRILLIANT and had CAJONES to stand up to Hades-PERFECTION! I am really hoping that Jack doesn't die-and I am going to almost say with confidence he won't but that is wishful thinking! BRILLIANT and OUT OF THIS WORLD chapter girl and I will be BOUNCING FOR MORE WHEN YOU GET IT UP! Lately sooooo much has been interfering with the immediate read I prefer but I will get it to it that is a VOW! The story is TOOOOOOOOO EXCELLENT NOT TO!