|Reviews for Downfall|
| Rosa Anderson chapter 30 . 8/1/2010
Lol, you're welcome hun, but you didn't have to bring special attention to me. :)
As for this chapter, it was interesting and a bit informative. Although I wasn't thrilled with Oliver from the start it is a bit sad that there is now a fierce haterd between Helena and him though. More Ash conflict might be fun, and maybe a like Jack-Helena action could be thrown in there. Awesome job.
Oh, and hun your working on 117 or 118 reviews so I am not the only one who is loving this!
| Rosa Anderson chapter 29 . 8/1/2010
Keep T rating should be fine as long as it doesn't get too graphic, and wow Oliver is back and worse than ever! I didn't hate him, but honestly to begin with I didn't 'love' him all that much... Aw, Jack is all protective...And yay for Harlow not being a total err...meanie? I can think of another word, but I'll refrain from cursing. :D
| Rosa Anderson chapter 28 . 8/1/2010
Essh, is Ash enough of a drama queen? Poor helena, she did deserve a little guilt for leading him on, but geeze. Ash is still semi-good in my book, but I love the whole Jack-Helena status. Adrian reminded me of a pushy big brother in this for some reason...Oh and I absolutely love how Jack is soo relaxed/controled in the ending of this chapter. It is kinda funny actually.
| Deleted123321 chapter 30 . 8/1/2010
I hate him, but i like Jack and Helena :)
| Deleted123321 chapter 29 . 8/1/2010
Hi :) I love your story... just wanted to say that :)
| Lola chapter 29 . 8/1/2010
I love this story... Seriously it's the best on FP
| Rosa Anderson chapter 27 . 7/29/2010
Dun...Dun...Dun...Ash returns! I so thought it'd Oliver though.
| Rosa Anderson chapter 26 . 7/29/2010
All I really can say is 'Wow' I think I am a been in awe-struck, about the whole HELENA COULD EXPLODE AT ANY MIN DUE TO HER POWERS~!
| Rosa Anderson chapter 25 . 7/29/2010
Okay, apparently that took 30 mins to read? Essh, I must be getting tired I never read that slow...or maybe that wasn't slow? Whatever, I am rambling and that is good.
Sorry!-Onto the chapter's actually review! Awesome chapter, quick question, the little book script was that in an actual book or did you purely make it up? Either way it was a bit 'Spooky' as Adrian said. I really hope Gwen has some answers for them, and that Jack finds out something that'll help if Gwen doesn't shed any light on the matter.
As for me, I seriously gotta get to bed...Soo, thank you for this interesting chapter, and you can except at least one review per chapter I come upon within reading and you updating-I hope that makes some sense! Sorry, if it doesn't my brain is begging for sleep...
| Rosa Anderson chapter 24 . 7/29/2010
I would totally says 'Yes, please!' to the intamacy thing, but I am figuring you already got the answer you were looking for. So, just ignore that little comment? Lol, for a second I thought something 'serious' was gonna happen, but then I thought 'No way, she'd probably warn people or something'
Anyways onto Chapter 25-And then to bed soo I can actually get up for work around noon (It's around 6:30am here)!
| Rosa Anderson chapter 23 . 7/29/2010
Wow, lovely battle scenes and teenage make-out scenes. :D Honestly I did NOT see Alex as the 'bad guy', but frankly after I thought about Harlow and all it made perfect sense. Its sad that I am such a hopeless romantic kinda girl, but I loved the ending to this chapter, it was purely adorable, and I adore you for ending it in such a way, sorta like a fairytale ending to a horror like begining? You'll have to forgive me if I make my reviews terribly long, and if I make minor spelling errors, as of late I've only but able to read the chapters at strange hours, mostly in the wee hours of the morning where my brain is begging for me to just crash. Anyways I absolutely adore and love this story, keep up the amazing work! *
| Rosa Anderson chapter 22 . 7/29/2010
Okay, I would say I totally hate you for that cliff hanger, but I don't! That just made me want to read the next chapter so much more. Anyways I can't be bothered to write anymore...because I wanna read the next chapter!
| Rosa Anderson chapter 21 . 7/29/2010
Hmm, a friendly battle after dinner? I am not so sure I would trust Helena with a sword just yet...but only time will tell if I should. Aww, is Harlow jealous of Jack and Helena? How...funny? Actually I think it's a tad annoying, but that's just me. Out of all the 'Demi-Gods' childern', I think that is what their supposed to be called-I believe I like Cora and Adrian the best.
| Rosa Anderson chapter 20 . 7/29/2010
Hmm, I am not all that sure on what to say. I believe I should start out with saying that I absolutely adore and love this story...Somehow you have managed to 'capture' my heart :) Ha-ha, and yes that was totally corny to some aspects :D It's cute how Jack fully accepts his relationship with Helena in front of everyone, but it's a bit surprising because at first he didn't want to admit he even had feelings for her...I wonder if she is the 'true love' or whatever was in Jack's prophecy (sp? Sorry it's like 3am for me. Yes, seriously I love this story that much!)
Anyways onto Chapter 21!
| Rosa Anderson chapter 19 . 7/28/2010
Wow, I was dying to read this chapter, sadly sleep and work got in the way first, so I am just now getting to read it :( I am not sure if I did this, but if I didn't I know I totally have to as this story is absolutely amazing. *Adds to Favorites* So Jack and Helena happily ever after? Where is the fun in that? I love it, but if I have learned anything about your writing style you will end up spicing it up a bit more before that happens.
Anyways onto Chapter 20!