|Reviews for Downfall|
| CoUrAgE mAkEr chapter 18 . 4/13/2010
thank you so much for updating so fast i don't know why but your stories have a way of making my happy and giddy when ever i think about them sometimes im sitting in class and one of your stories pops up in my mind and all you hear from he is he hehe he he...
anyways i love your style in writing and you stories thank you
| ponponcake chapter 18 . 4/13/2010
oh my oh my I love this story, what an unusual plot :) Helena is such an amazing character hehe can't wait to see what happens when she meets her cousins :D hope you update soon!
| Floppy125 chapter 18 . 4/13/2010
aw! I loved this chapter! they were so sweet!
please upadate ASAP
| aureliasilver chapter 17 . 4/13/2010
I had a strange feeling that her dad was Hades...I really couldnt think of an Angelic persona dark enough or potent enough that people would want to automatically try to kill it's offspring :) Very nice story so far.
| lauralie16 chapter 17 . 4/12/2010
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more!
| Floppy125 chapter 17 . 4/12/2010
OMG I loved this quote: "I guess it didn't matter who you were or who your father was: parents were just downright humiliating." Hahahahaha...
Anyways... I loved this chapter! I'm so amazed by your imagination :) I would love to see more of Jack and her as a couple! I know that things are going slow for them, but they should be together by now!
Please update ASAP
| under the milky way chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
Oh its Hades-baby :) Really great written style throughout so far so well done, you've kept me really interested! Looking forward to seeing what happens when she sees her father! x
| under the milky way chapter 11 . 4/12/2010
Aw I love Ash, he's so sweet. :)
| under the milky way chapter 8 . 4/12/2010
Stupid bastardos who beat her up. UGH! But thankfully Jack was there like a Knight in Shining Armour! Brilliant! :) Great great chapter!
| under the milky way chapter 5 . 4/12/2010
I'm really pleased that you introduced new characters, I like them all especially Ash :) Daisy and Arlie seem quirky so their cool and we'll just have to see about Elodie; I'm sensing jealousy here, another great chapter! :) Love reading them all! x
| under the milky way chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
Woo! Exciting stuff! :) And his names Jack :D x
| under the milky way chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Well this sounds interesting to me :) I like how you've written it to introduce everything; well done! Looking forward to reading more and we'll see how it goes! :D x
| Floppy125 chapter 16 . 4/10/2010
OMG! I'm impressed by your imagination!
Have you ever read Percy Jackson and the Olympians? (though now it's a major movie...) It's an awsome series.
Anyways... I absolutely loved this chapter! (though I'm sad that Jack didn't appear)
Please update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I can't wait for more :)
| Floppy125 chapter 15 . 4/6/2010
OMG! I love this story :)
please update ASAP
| ClassicStatic chapter 15 . 4/5/2010
WOW. This was...just...amazing! I love it. I love everything about it. It's so captivating! I want to read more. Update soon please. Can't wait!