Reviews for Downfall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AWWW poop! Well, update soon please :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite interesting. Post whenever :) |
![]() ![]() I loved this, how blunt it all was, this rewrite is fantastic |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN IT TO HELL Cass-the INTENSITY and THRILL OF THIS CHAPTER just about killed me! My chest constricted and could barely get breath in my lungs! I am so looking forward to the battle and seeing what happens! I hope Helena actually kills Oliver herself-the slimey sleaze bag-LOL! You my girl should be published-LITERALLY AND HONESTLY-you write with all the elements needed and YOU have a way with words and telling a story-I WILL DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE-THE ANXIETY OF IT ALL HAS ME BOUNCING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH!MY!GOD! Cass-spluttering for words here-I AM AT A COMPLETE LOSS! WOW! WOW! ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY HOT HOT HOT! It was also done very very well! It also leads me to the question (and feel free not to answer) but just how old are you? You wrote their lovemaking PERFECTLY-even me at my old age and experience find it difficult to write such scenes in my story! YOU TOTALLY AND EFFECTIVELY BLEW ME TO KINGDOM COME WITH THIS CHAPTER! I DEFINITELY BOW TO YOU MY FRIEND! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOOOVE |
![]() ![]() OMG! update fast please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. Love. It. :) |
![]() ![]() awesome! more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH HOW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER-and you gave us just enough to TEASE us with their little ADMISSIONS! Another BEAUTIFUL AND EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTER AND WRITING Cass! I will pm you to explain the late reading of this-but I REALLY HATE to this story end-I HAVE FALLEN IRREVOCABLY IN LOVE WITH YOUR CHARACTERS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Well Done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there a hot scene coming up? |
![]() ![]() more please. |
![]() ![]() So there is no love triangle with Luke? :( I though Helena and Luke would always make a better couple. |