Reviews for Downfall
bookppl93 chapter 27 . 11/18/2012
AWWW poop! Well, update soon please :3
Brightyellow chapter 27 . 11/18/2012
Quite interesting. Post whenever :)
steph chapter 27 . 11/18/2012
I loved this, how blunt it all was, this rewrite is fantastic
Alaeryel chapter 26 . 11/12/2012
DAMN IT TO HELL Cass-the INTENSITY and THRILL OF THIS CHAPTER just about killed me! My chest constricted and could barely get breath in my lungs! I am so looking forward to the battle and seeing what happens! I hope Helena actually kills Oliver herself-the slimey sleaze bag-LOL! You my girl should be published-LITERALLY AND HONESTLY-you write with all the elements needed and YOU have a way with words and telling a story-I WILL DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE-THE ANXIETY OF IT ALL HAS ME BOUNCING!
Alaeryel chapter 25 . 11/12/2012
OH!MY!GOD! Cass-spluttering for words here-I AM AT A COMPLETE LOSS!
WOW! WOW! ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY HOT HOT HOT! It was also done very very well! It also leads me to the question (and feel free not to answer) but just how old are you? You wrote their lovemaking PERFECTLY-even me at my old age and experience find it difficult to write such scenes in my story! YOU TOTALLY AND EFFECTIVELY BLEW ME TO KINGDOM COME WITH THIS CHAPTER! I DEFINITELY BOW TO YOU MY FRIEND!
bookppl93 chapter 26 . 11/1/2012
LOOOVE
mylittleprincess chapter 26 . 11/1/2012
OMG! update fast please.
Morganvla chapter 25 . 10/27/2012
Awesome!
bookppl93 chapter 25 . 10/27/2012
I. Love. It. :)
Guest chapter 25 . 10/25/2012
awesome! more please.
Alaeryel chapter 24 . 10/7/2012
OH HOW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER-and you gave us just enough to TEASE us with their little ADMISSIONS! Another BEAUTIFUL AND EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTER AND WRITING Cass! I will pm you to explain the late reading of this-but I REALLY HATE to this story end-I HAVE FALLEN IRREVOCABLY IN LOVE WITH YOUR CHARACTERS!
I caught myself chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Well Done.
bookppl93 chapter 24 . 9/28/2012
Is there a hot scene coming up?
mylittleprincess chapter 24 . 9/28/2012
more please.
StayWithMe08 chapter 24 . 9/28/2012
So there is no love triangle with Luke? :( I though Helena and Luke would always make a better couple.
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