Reviews for Downfall
Morganvla chapter 24 . 9/28/2012
Gahhhh awkk
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 23 . 9/17/2012
please update soon.
Alaeryel chapter 23 . 9/8/2012
Cass-another AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL chapter! Believe me I understand how it can be but I think YOU ARE DOING AN EXCEPTIONAL JOB and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! TRY TO KEEP YOUR CHIN UP AND things will begin to start falling into place again for you-I will be YOUR PERSONAL CHEERLEADER IF NEEDED-JUST KNOW YOU HAVE TOUCHED ME DEEPLY HERE IN MY HEART and you are right-you have a GREAT and SOLID STORY HERE and the characters ARE OUT OF THIS WORLD!
bookppl93 chapter 23 . 9/8/2012
Yay! Another chapter! If you need help for ideas I think I could try and help. Just pm me :)
Alaeryel chapter 22 . 8/29/2012
OMG OMG OMG-YOU COMPLETELY FLABBERGASTED ME Cass! LOVED the training scene and a 10 yr old beating her IT WAS GREAT! The end was PERFECTION now I know why Grant did all that he did towards her! EXCELLENT AND BRILLIANT AS USUAL! Forgive me for being so late on reading and reviewing my FRIEND-things have been bad here for the 3 weeks and have been trying to deal with alot plus sis has put limitations on computer time BUT I PROMISE TO TRY TO DO BETTER!
findings chapter 22 . 8/25/2012
The character pics on your profile page helped me image them better! Thank you love!
bookppl93 chapter 22 . 8/24/2012
I want Hades to come back and show Helena more of her powers :) thanks.
Brightyellow chapter 22 . 8/24/2012
I disagree with 'Fario', i don't want this jealousy emotion. Why would Jack be jealous? and by whom? Obviously not Luke. Here's a praise for your realistic writing! Cheers! I want to see a bloody war. Heh.
Fario chapter 22 . 8/24/2012
I want more jealousy from Jack... make Helena desirable or something.

Maybe I'm just being overly needy for cliché romance.

And concerning Oliver, if he really wanted to kill Helena, wouldn't he have had plenty of opportunities while they were best friends? Why wait?
bookppl93 chapter 21 . 8/20/2012
Nice.. I wish jack would've come... There might've been a.. Scene
findings chapter 21 . 8/18/2012
This chapter was really short :'( but it was good because it was a break from all their training and they got to hang loose and...get drunk...
I don't know if it's just me but I think it would be cool to see a love triangle with Helena, Jack, and Luke. I still like Luke better than Jack, i dunno.

BitterSweetShimmer chapter 21 . 8/18/2012
So good!
Fario chapter 21 . 8/18/2012
*girlish squeals*

AAAHHH! Bring on the jealousy and the love triangles! XD
Alaeryel chapter 21 . 8/18/2012
Cass-I ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY and UTTERLY LOOOOOOOVED THIS CHAPTER! I really ENJOYED THE NEW CHARACTERS-ESPECIALLY Jack's mother and step dad! The party scene was PURE PERFECTION-it made me wish I was there right now and away from real life! I was TOTALLY THRILLED TO SEE AN UPDATE today! You are AMAZINGLY PERFECT!
Brightyellow chapter 21 . 8/17/2012
Remember you said their won't be a love triangle with Jack, Luke and Hel. Well, what's up with the last sentence? Well, this was an alright chapter. Considering that I'm reading this at 2am. I don't have my usual critique, enjoy. Haha. It was a good chapter. Good thought and time put into it. Bravo.
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