awesome syory ! update fast please.

Oo-oo! lots of stuff is happening! Don't worry, I think your romantic scenes are fine :)

OMG Cass-this was-was-OMG PERFECTION! You do very well with the romantic scenes so don't sweat it! I am not so sure I like Jack's dad-TOO IMPERSONAL towards his son! You left me HANGING ON A TIGHTROPE and I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! LOVE THIS SSSOOOOOOO IMMENSELY MY STOMACH ACHES FROM WANT! I WILL BE ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR IT ALL!

If Angel lore interests you particularly Azrael then I would check out the story Mortal Heart Volume I: Above its amazing and its on this site I have become friends with the author and she is a doll I think it would be of interest to you I just thought you would like to check it out volume 1 is complete but she is in the process of changing the location from NY to Seattle. Loved this chapter.
Much love,
Sarah
A.k.a. blondiej1

Reading your 'awkwardly' written confession scene wasn't actually bad. You did a great job writing that. Thank you for telling me that their won't be a love triangle, I highy appreciate that. I'm also happy that you release a chapter every 2 days or so, it makes me have somethin to look out for. Mhmm, I'm hoping there won't be a rapid 'sexual' build quickly. I admire your use of adjectives. Just a randon question, over the chapters i've lost Helena's personality; what is her traits? I can't see anything but, maybe, a midly mono-tone girl.

Nice

Ooooh, it's getting exciting now!

I LOVED how this chapter was written Cass-it was BEAUTIFULLY DONE and I LOVED the names anyway-and as I don't know the series blue bloods-it never crossed my mind tho now I am very curious about it. I LOVE the TENSION BETWEEN Jack and Helena-it is EXCEPTIONAL AND KEEPS US ON OUR TOES. I had an idea when Oliver turned on him that he wasn't what he appeared to be! I felt her DISAPPOINTED AND DOUBT at her ability to judge others-I love this group she is with now and there is a small part of me that kinda would like to see some romantic interest between Luke and Helena also but she has it bad for Jack. YOU AGAIN DID ANOTHER BRILLIANT AND MAGNIFICENT JOB OF WRITING THIS !

Do me a favour.
Could ya please?
Don't turn this story into an overrated love triangle. With Jack, Luke and the girl. Please, just don't do that; i'm really sick of love triangles! That's my only request.

I loved Oliver. Until I heard this. I always wanted a friend named Oliver!

Luke and Helena 3 They should have tumbled together, and Luke should have fallen on top of her and for just a split seconds they looked into each other's eyes and felt the temptation to kiss. Then Daisy and Arlie crashed through and broke the moment! But Luke never forgets what he felt, and so begins the love triangle!

lol, sorry about my little fanfic, but I dreamed it up and just had to share. I'm weak for scenes like that.
But I really am torn, Jack, or Luke? Which to choose? :P

P.S. don't mind me, I'm a hopeless romantic...

i dont see how you'd be ripping off blue bloods (read it and loved it!) because your story line is original and using reincarnations instead of offspring would enhance the plotline... although i suppose since Helena is already a mythical creature's offspring it would make more sense for Jack and Ariadne to be children of angels as well so it seems like they're all in the same generation and age...

love it so far and i hope to hear more from you soon!

I almost cried. C'mon Jack you know you want her!

Cass-you PLAYED IT OUT TO PERFECTION as far as I am concerned! I saw signs of attraction between both of them, and I thought I had hints between Helena and Luke! I felt the EMOTIONS you PORTRAYED in your characters and FELT THEM MYSELF! This chapter was PURELY EXCEPTIONAL AND WILL BE WATCHING FOR MORE-CANNOT GET ENOUGH!

I think this scene worked out perfectly. You led up to it with enough hints at the romantic feelings between them. :) I loved it. I didn't notice any mistakes or anything else.