Finish it.
It has so much potential

Me likey. I hope you decide to continue and update soon. :)

I hope that you come back to finish this troy. It is really good to begin with. Love it!

Great first chapter, I loved how you described each character! :)

As you can see, i'm back online. Ciaran showing up at her house is something that i would never have expected and I like the twist. I thought for sure he'd skulk off somewhere. Leona letting him...very interesting and I'm ready for more.

Good read. Leona is REALLY extending herself to Ciaran. She barely knows him and is going out of her way to care for him.

I'm looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing.

looking forward to reading

Well, damn, Leona! Ciaran is going to have her help, and I suggest he learn to love it, lol. For a zombie-sick person Leona does seem to have her head. And why exactly did Ciaran turn up at her house as opposed to the countless other places he could go? I get why he didn't return to the bar, and even to his lady friend's place, but Leona's place? Interesting. Definitely got what you meant by "Morgan", bit of a Jack Daniels fan myself. Driving without a license? That's either going to work out...or not, lol. I'm anxious to find out how she manages. Goodness, they're both so messed up. Ah, well, maybe she'll give him her germs for all the disruption he's caused. And I've got an idea or two about that fire in her belly.

This is too long now, but I loved the chapter and her friend, Mika. Can't wait for more of that dynamic.

On the prowl for more

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Can't wait for your next chapter, very good and I never normally read straight stories.

can't wait to read more!

oh, the possibilities. lol leona's a better person than most, responding to both people at four in the morning and taking care of the latter like that. i really like her, but ciaran's going to have to work a little harder. he's a bit of an advantageous jerk right now. but nice development either way. excited to see more.

Just started reading this and love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is great.

Well, Ciaran, I was waiting on his point of view! And I was not disappointed, he's a bit shitty when it comes to Melanie but I understand it. He's very much a real person in my mind, flawed in the human way. This chapter is my favorite so far, because of that bit about her hair. I laughed out loud, maybe because I just took my braids down, or maybe because it's fascinating that people actually wonder about things like that. _ Who knows, but I loved it. Trevor is rude and those goons he has with him, they pack a pretty punch. I worry Ciaran will spend his Saturday nursing a couple of bruises. And how Deep in the hole is he, I wonder?

Waiting for More, Meechi E

oh, dear. what the hell is ciaran in? smh. awesome perspective on him though. you wrote him well. excited to see more.