Reviews for The Endless Game
GingerNinja93 chapter 4 . 10/14/2013
This is brilliant :D really enjoyed this story, its very well written and I look forward to seeing more
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
amazing story so far! I love the action! Will it be finished?

I lost 36 pages of notes that took me weeks and weeks to write... I just re-started... and then I lost it again... but my point is you should really finish this story!

Tarah xXx
ALittleLunatic chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Mask's Shadow chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
I only made it to the second chapter and I'm already hooked. I've been wanting to write a card story for some time, but had no luck. Seeing this, I feel my passion for writing burning bright. I just need to find a direction for it or I'll burn out again.

Keep writing this good, it's what we all want.
MsParanoia chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
Yvette! Please come back:( I miss your work
Annalynn Roe chapter 4 . 1/19/2011
Absolutely love the story, hope you update really soon!

Aw, that sucks, last year the same thing happened to me, my hard-drive crashed and I lost everything on my computer, including the 20,0 word story I had to restart from scratch . hope you don't have to much trouble.
A.G. Hawkeye chapter 4 . 12/25/2010
I was happy to know I got a review saying my story was intriguing. But, damn, yours is great!

Carrie is an unique character, and the whole idea for your story is original and interesting!

I like the way you describe things and how the cards have their own personality. I just love the twins! :D

Even though The Shield's attitude is kinda cliche-in a way, not completely- I still want to know more about his past and how he got to turn into a card!

I hope you'll write more and continue with Carrie's story. Cheers!

alexacristina chapter 4 . 11/29/2010
Please update ASAP! Love the story! I wanna know more about The Shield! Don't keep us, fans, waiting! .
SassyGrl chapter 3 . 6/29/2010
Please update this soon & your other, hell high!
SassyGrl chapter 4 . 6/25/2010
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 4 . 6/25/2010
I love it.!.

It is such an interesting concept and the last part of this chapter made me cry, how life would suck to be Carrie.

One question, did you name her Carrie after that book by Stephen King.?. When I realised what type of story this is, is it amazing how alike they are.

Update soon please :)
RYTwinDemon chapter 4 . 6/24/2010
The Murderer's awesome. :)) It might just be me, but I LOVE his character... I dunno, I think I have a thing for bloodthirsty psychopaths. :)) I loved his reaction when Carrie grabbed his blade.
StephJoy chapter 4 . 6/3/2010
You absolutely have to update! I love how original the story idea is. I can honestly say I have never read a story like this one. You've got me hooked! :)
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
OMG! this story is completley amazing! i have read four chapters and already in love with it :) It was heart breaking to hear that her brother wants her dead, i knda wanted her to run away and him feel completly guilty. Loving the shield i think he sounds really good looking and its so sweet how he is protecting her. I seriously can not wait to read more of youro awesome story i hope it will be soon :)
Saikado Mai chapter 4 . 4/9/2010
I LOVE IT! :D And not just because my name is Carrie. _;

xD Update soon! It's really intriguing. I do have one request, if you would, would you describe the physical appearances of the characters (other than the cards, got a good enough image of them, haha) more?

Much love! :3
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