Reviews for Magically Delightful
ZOMG chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
this is so sweet! gah, i think im acquiring a fetish for men with kids now XD

could u share the rest of this story soon please? :D
jessicas favorite stories chapter 1 . 3/20/2010

whens the next chapter gonna come out?
Bedlam Chaos chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
What a nice beginning. I don't know how it will continue but the start of this chapter is realistic and... Yeah it's good. I hope you'll keep the story anchored in reality because that's what attracts me the most :).
MeredithAncret chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Wonderful, a brand new story! I think I'm bound to love this one, since it has these 3 amusing children in it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
firestar267 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
This was a great introduction to what I'm sure will be a great story. The character development was of a good pace and you wrote the children well - a lot of the time authors don't seem to be able to write children realistically, but you did. It's also a nice change to read something mature, not set in a school so this was a refreshing and enjoyable read. I can't wait for more!
JtheChosen1 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
This looks really good, a lot of potential here!
DefineNightmare chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Did you hear that? That was my squeal popping eardrums! That was just too cute, the fluffy sweetness overload gave me cavities.

...what is with me and corny sayings today? XD

update sooN!

Jake is adorable *magic fingers*
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