|Reviews for The Stars in our Eyes|
| lever du soleil chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
I like the last three lines the best, they really seem to flow.
I think the ending of a poem is the most important part.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Is both an option? Nice analogy about the oceans skirt and you're very clever in this.