Reviews for Flying, Always Flying
rockettwriter4 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
i loved the first half but the second half was just pathetic. big gap there, huh? its just that the last part of this was so repetetive and in some cases and author who writes well can make it worl, but you did not. keep writing. maybe if you revise this...then it would be good. its just ok for now :)
campbellkid chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Is this meant to be depressing.