|Reviews for The Keeping|
| Mirandamau chapter 5 . 1/6
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Miranda, an editor for a fast growing platform, may i know how to reach you professionally?
| dramalover21 chapter 1 . 9/30/2021
Sad that these aren’t up anymore. Even sadder that the published version of the book doesn’t have any of the love scenes the FP version had which is really disappointing. Part of what made these stories so good on here was that they read like a real adult romance. Why ever did you convert to a fade to black in the published version?
| zagato chapter 5 . 3/4/2021
| Guest x chapter 43 . 5/12/2015
Great work XX Read " The Mating " and thoroughly enjoyed it XX
After Ryne actually appeared in the story, near its end, he quickly became my favourite character x
So glad you continued on a story for him x You could go on forever with these xxx
Well done x!
| Ummm chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
SKOW winner? I'd put this in last places. I don't even know who nominated this story in the Sex with Kittens, Ogres, and Witches poll.
lame. no witch sex.
| MileyRowling chapter 43 . 9/10/2014
| KlausDamonCrush chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
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| Chy chapter 43 . 5/2/2014
I have read both the Mating & the Keeping...I enjoyed every bit of it. This is a great book to read. I gladly recommended a must read and can't believe its over after I started liking the characters. :'(
| betallen chapter 21 . 3/30/2014
I really am enjoying your story. I can understand the problem with the word filler since without it we wouldn't understand the characters nor how they react to certain things and why. but you have to remember some people just like being back seat drivers love to tell people how to write even if they would cause the story to crash and burn if they had their way about it. You are doing awesome so don't let them bother you..and i hope things get less stressing for you. thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us.
| WYMamataro chapter 3 . 3/26/2014
I've been hooked on your stories for days! I have a term paper due and two exams tomorrow but I CAN'T BULGE FROM THIS! XD
| THE NIGERIAN chapter 33 . 2/20/2014
1st time commenting. I'm guessing the Mel and Ryne blood bonded without knowing about it during the bar fight. I suspect she's got Lycan ancestry and the bond triggered it? Dunno. Ryne's a jerk, but he's pretty cool.
| Jason Cullen chapter 43 . 12/16/2013
I loved this book! I like the series! Can't wait to read the next one!
| earthbender068 chapter 39 . 7/24/2013
oh Kane! and Helen is the perfect example of a leaders wife. that entire pack should look up to her. she's willing to sacrifice herself when I'm sure Kane would let leave with the others. Kane...these semi rogue guys, Kane, Reno, Ryne, and Damien love hard don't they?
i bet Reno and melody smell great too.
| earthbender068 chapter 38 . 7/24/2013
you know after reading some of betrayal...I know wonder if Greyson was part fae. it seems to fit. the knowledge of danger and the ability to read his competition or a situation. I'm happy that Cassandra was named after his mom. it is a sad situation that he lost the love of his life and then had to raise this little girl all alone. you know if Grayson was a lycan, he'd make on hellava alpha. though he's not that compassionate, so I can see him as a rogue.
| earthbender068 chapter 37 . 7/24/2013
oh doesn't ryne know the moment you tell someone not to think of something, that's all they can think about? geez! I love when the two of them argue. it seems so natural. even more so than Reno and brandy.
and finally she figures out the beauty of her dream, lol!