|Reviews for The Keeping|
| zagato chapter 5 . 3/4
| Guest x chapter 43 . 5/12/2015
Great work XX Read " The Mating " and thoroughly enjoyed it XX
After Ryne actually appeared in the story, near its end, he quickly became my favourite character x
So glad you continued on a story for him x You could go on forever with these xxx
Well done x!
| Ummm chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
SKOW winner? I'd put this in last places. I don't even know who nominated this story in the Sex with Kittens, Ogres, and Witches poll.
lame. no witch sex.
| MileyRowling chapter 43 . 9/10/2014
| KlausDamonCrush chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
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| Chy chapter 43 . 5/2/2014
I have read both the Mating & the Keeping...I enjoyed every bit of it. This is a great book to read. I gladly recommended a must read and can't believe its over after I started liking the characters. :'(
| betallen chapter 21 . 3/30/2014
I really am enjoying your story. I can understand the problem with the word filler since without it we wouldn't understand the characters nor how they react to certain things and why. but you have to remember some people just like being back seat drivers love to tell people how to write even if they would cause the story to crash and burn if they had their way about it. You are doing awesome so don't let them bother you..and i hope things get less stressing for you. thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us.
| WYMamataro chapter 3 . 3/26/2014
I've been hooked on your stories for days! I have a term paper due and two exams tomorrow but I CAN'T BULGE FROM THIS! XD
| THE NIGERIAN chapter 33 . 2/20/2014
1st time commenting. I'm guessing the Mel and Ryne blood bonded without knowing about it during the bar fight. I suspect she's got Lycan ancestry and the bond triggered it? Dunno. Ryne's a jerk, but he's pretty cool.
| Jason Cullen chapter 43 . 12/16/2013
I loved this book! I like the series! Can't wait to read the next one!
| earthbender068 chapter 39 . 7/24/2013
oh Kane! and Helen is the perfect example of a leaders wife. that entire pack should look up to her. she's willing to sacrifice herself when I'm sure Kane would let leave with the others. Kane...these semi rogue guys, Kane, Reno, Ryne, and Damien love hard don't they?
i bet Reno and melody smell great too.
| earthbender068 chapter 38 . 7/24/2013
you know after reading some of betrayal...I know wonder if Greyson was part fae. it seems to fit. the knowledge of danger and the ability to read his competition or a situation. I'm happy that Cassandra was named after his mom. it is a sad situation that he lost the love of his life and then had to raise this little girl all alone. you know if Grayson was a lycan, he'd make on hellava alpha. though he's not that compassionate, so I can see him as a rogue.
| earthbender068 chapter 37 . 7/24/2013
oh doesn't ryne know the moment you tell someone not to think of something, that's all they can think about? geez! I love when the two of them argue. it seems so natural. even more so than Reno and brandy.
and finally she figures out the beauty of her dream, lol!
| earthbender068 chapter 36 . 7/22/2013
dum dum dummmm! will melody believe ryne even after he transformed in front of her? you know i loved that she submitted to him subtly the entire story. i guess based on his reaction earlier to her, on humans the alpha gene comes of as someone very powerful. kinda like greyson, who would be an alpha in his own right.
you know i think you out did marla as a villian with the creation of aldrich.
| earthbender068 chapter 35 . 7/22/2013
i'm happy that kane and elise are in this story also. i like when characters like this crossover. elise has always been strong, but bent to the will of the alpha. i don't see it as her just giving in to her husband, but to the 'orders' of her alpha. she was like that with her dad in the mating. she protested at first the arranged mating, but essentially when her father made it clear this is what he wanted her to do she complied. however here, she flat out said no. she answered kane as his wife not as a member of his pack. i liked that. she put her foot down when she felt she would lose the life of the man she loved.
people think your women are weak? so is the definition of a strong woman, one who makes her husband do all the chores, and she makes all the decisions, and he cowers before her in stupidity? the thing is i hate that women nowadays feel like they have to run the house and be in charge of everything and men are incompetent. isn't that the same image that women fought against for so long? so why would we place that stigma on men that we love? i love your women, cause i get the world that has been set up for them. elise may bend to her alpha's will, but i haven't seen an example of kane making a decision that was idiotic. (other than their argument in the mating...and that was just jealousy and who hasn't been guilty of that)
oh ryne...of course you have to run in to protect melody! she needs you. she cant go through this change on her own. i know that aldrich mentioned having his way with melody, but i can honestly say, he seems as interested in sex as a tomato, or sheldon from the big bang theory, if you watch that show.
ryne did well though. i often wonder what he and kane would have been like had reno gotten a hold of them. it may have killed the man dealing with all three of them.
oh and i found this guy and he's who i picture as damien. i know this review is all over the place. sorry.
you have to piece it together. if it doesn't work, its from a site called bookishtempatations on wordpress and it's from an april 23 2013 blog called tantalizing tuesdays. its the brazialian model, Marlon Teixeira. he's uber hot with his beard...
anyway on to the next chapter.