|Reviews for The Keeping|
| ShadowBrilliance chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Rol, Mel thinks Ryne is seventy...oh, hey, is it ohkay if I use the name Ryne in one of my stories?
ANyways, thanks! I did have a good birthday. )
I like this chapter, but URGH! I forgot, and, for clarity, why does Mel's boss want Ryne's info so bad? Ugh. Ah well.
Hope we get a taste of Ryne's POV soon!
Can a human and a werewolf mate? I think they can...hmm. Would that be against a tribe's rules though?
Nevermind. Update soon!
-I Heart ?-
| pbgurl chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
first, YAY for Elise being pregnant. About time there were extremely good looking mini Kane's running around, lol!
I can't wait for the first meeting between Ryne and Mel.
I'm even more excited about this story and Mel is already becoming my favorite character, more then Elise. Not that I don't love Elise, she's awesome but I really like Mel's more adventurous attitude. _
| un chien andalusia chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
Mel is charmingly normal although I suspect that there is a mental and emotional strength under the ordinariness. We'll see how you develop her character as the story unfolds, which is very intriguing thus far. I like how you have yet to let Ryne step into the story in person. It is teasing!
| cmc21 chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
I've just read all of your previous story, and
I'm very excited to read Ryne's story! You're a wonderful author, can't wait for the next update!
| tehcow chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
haha thanks for the author's reply! i will definitely check out cupid's psyche stories.
| Cupid's Psyche chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Oh, I’m so excited I don’t know where to start! Well, first, I completely love Mel. In just a few paragraphs you captured her so perfectly, and I really identify with her so I’m hoping for some good things in her future (Ryne, for instance). Plus, I love that she’s not “in the loop”. I can’t wait to see the wolves through an outsider’s eyes. And I love her reason for being there, her character ties the two stories together nicely, which brings me to Elise. Cameos! Love it! I can’t wait for Kane’s. He’s in it right…? You wouldn’t hide him away from us…right? Great chapter!
| Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Oh my god he’s got Kane’s picture! Sorry, hideously excitable fan girl moment there. Clears throat.
That was really good. You put a lot more detail into the scenery and atmosphere of that piece than you normally did in the mating. And it was a wonderfully kooky way to start. Especially for those of us in the know. One things. The butler in formal gear? I’m not sure a butler would be unformal. Not at work anyway.
And kane looking arrogant? Surely not. ;) it was a good way to draw in his character even though we aren’t going to see him in this.
There’s more detail than usual in the next paragraph as well. In a good way. I loved the humorous description of the small town, and the three wolves livening up the bar. I think I’m going to enjoy this.
| Goddess Sati chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
a good start, I like Mel's character very much, please continue, it gets better by the minute:)
| MaxMcDowell chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
YAY! Update! Thank you, I can't wait to see where this story goes.
| ChristianAngel01 chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
whoa his is certainy very interesting! Ilove it!
| Lovecupid chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
Great story so far.
| HeARmeRaWR chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
This is coming along great! And Elise! AH! lol I hope she's pregnant. Can't wait to read more!
I know it's a bit early to ask this but is Marla going to come back in this story at anytime, cause she sorta disappeared in The Mating... \
| Fightingrose chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
I'm so glad you decided to post a sequel! I like the story so far and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
| readaholicxxx chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
Oh is Elise pregnant? I'm liking Mel already..
Can't wait for more!
| under the milky way chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
Glad that your back writing, really looking forward to reading this story and seeing how it progresses as I am already in love with Ryne and Mel seems pretty darn cool too; well as a couple their already going to be great in my eyes! :) Keep up the great work! xx