|Reviews for The Keeping|
| ShadowBrilliance chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
Hmm . . . that message Aldrich wrote reminded me of Pretty Little Liars , because the messages always end in - A . Anyways , I hope Cassie won't fall for this ( Did she see that Aldrich had killed Greyson ? Update soon , I want in on the Finding )
| Redsun.Bluemoon chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
HOLY MOCHA! I knew she'd be back! Ugh!
Anywho, I'm sad that this has come to an end but also very pleased to hear that more will be coming! The Finding is a great name. Lol. Nw just remember that those of us with the faint of hearts cannot bare to wait for too long! Lol.
Thanks so much for a wonderful and exhilerating read!
| lil and tiny chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
It just ended! Ah! It's not completely over yet - Poor Cassie's still alone with Aldrich after her!
Kinda bitter sweet that The Keeping ends this way, but it sorta fits. This story is about Melody and Ryne after all. Looking forward to a new episode!
| readaholicxxx chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
no way...woah, that was an amazing ending to the story. I'm so excited for the next one!
| A ventriloquists ventriloquist chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
SNAP. CRACKLE. POP! third book is going to be crazy! Now for the waiting game...dammit! I was kinda hoping for a little more on Ryne and Melody but i guess this will have to suffice [ I WILL be watching!
| PeterMoore chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
thank you! amazing story!
| jmr79au chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
You have really made me hanging on for more. I am interested to see how the packs go since the danger is not over, as to see how the relationship develops between Bryan and Cassandra. Also can't wait to find out about Elise's baby and more on Ryne and Mel.
I love all of your stories and good luck with "The Finding".
And yes I did gasp to. Who wouldn't? The bitch is back.
| FlowerGirl7 chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
OH MY GOD MARLA! god that women doesnt give up! ah its over,, the story was amazing, now i cant wait for the finding, u left me wanting more and not wanting to wait lol! any whoo great great job x
| I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
gasp? i nearly choked on air at that last bit haha, cant wait for the next story it should be awesome XD
| Arvael chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
I'll download it, but not for the bribe (although, it would be really nice to read that sneak peak! ;) ) - when you started this series, I don't know if you remember, but I immediately asked if it would be in downloadable format like the other one :)
Anyway, I... damn, I thought we'll get more info here! x3 And Aldrich is an idiot. I've never said this, but... I think his message and in every major newspaper... It's just too risky. Or am I just too paranoid? I mean, he should be happy he's alive and now he risks his life again? Not that I'm like Aldrich, but even if I was, I tried to come up with a safer plan.
Ugh, enough about him already!
I'm crossing my fingers for Cassandra and I'm really looking forward to the Finding! Think you can send me a message when you begin uploading it? Because I only check stories here up from 40K and I'd like to read it from the very beginning when you upload the new chapters :)
Thank you for this story and have a nice day, full of inspiration!
| P.Quill chapter 43 . 8/2/2010
Oh my god! Marla! NO! Aha loved how everything turned out right. I'm guessing all the dispersed packs got sent back home yeah? I can't believe it was Marla! Loved the story and I will definitely be reading The Finding. :)
| Midnight113 chapter 43 . 8/1/2010
Wow, you definitely left me wanting more. How could you? ;) So good, I was completely caught off guard with Marla's appearance, lol. Nice work. I'm totally going to miss this story but I can't wait to read 'The Finding'. Well done!
| Destiny1406 chapter 43 . 8/1/2010
loved this story! i think i might have liked this one betterthan the Mating! lol. I just love the badboys types and RYne was so one ;)
I knew there was going to be a third one ;)) Cassie and Bryan will be adorable together!
Please don't take too long to post the third installment in this trilogy!
| Roni5 chapter 43 . 8/1/2010
I am totally addicted to your stories. Have been since the first chapter of The Mating. I can't wait until the next story to begin. Also I will admit, I did gasp at the end.
| MaxMcDowell chapter 43 . 8/1/2010
I knew that she had to turn up some where,and I can't wait to read a story about Bryan and Cassie