|Reviews for The Keeping|
| konichiwa2u chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
I definitely thought it'd take a lot more work for Melody to find Ryne's whereabouts but I guess this works out also! Kane's so hilarious as always, suggest Elise send him potato sack instead of a sweater!XD Now she has a clue where to find him! Can't wait until they meet!
| konichiwa2u chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
They met! Elise and Melody!XD Somehow I just know Melody's research won't turn out so great since the weres are going to keep things in secret, but I know she's very determined and so she'll find Ryne's residence and then they'll meet!
| konichiwa2u chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
OMG! So exited! I just finished reading "The Mating" and now I'm reading this! I have a feeling I'll really love this story! I knew the photo of Kane was going to have a meaning somewhere b/c it still bothered me after the incident of it being sold off. Oh and about Ryne, Bryan, and Daniel being gay; I couldn't stop laughing! Anyways! Great work as always!
| meyersfan1 chapter 21 . 1/3/2012
huh! I personly find the way your FILLED the chapter to be quite refreshing. I like knowing what I'm supposed to be picturing instead of "They meet,the fight,they confuse eachother and oh wait now they are in love and have sex." Otherwise it wouldn't be called a story.
Thank you for the read. I enjoyed your previous books as well.
| Tie Clever chapter 43 . 1/2/2012
You Know, I was never a big fan of Werewolves but DARN ou write good Werewolf stories.I loved this. I'm sad that Lucy died, it made the story more epic that she did but I'm still sad.
Anyway great story and I can't wait to finish The Finding.
| Bandicoot13 chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
Awesome story. :)
| Ninavs chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Aaawww amazing story! Now I'm in love with Ryne...But also sooo sad for Lucy! :/
| janel bennik chapter 43 . 10/23/2011
I LOVE UR STORIES THEY AR SO GOOD! sorry i had to get that off my chest not trying to be cheesy or anything i just finished The Keeping and the The Mating and about to start The Finding. love the little twist at the end :)
| TheLonelyShe-Wolf chapter 43 . 10/2/2011
love your stories. im looking forward to the next story. i wonder if cassie will find a mate and accept being a werewolve? also DAMN Alrich to hell. HATE HIM TA BITS! thumbs up for your stories. your a great author.
| FantasyReader15 chapter 43 . 9/24/2011
I had some belief that Ms. Matthews was the ...
Darn. 2 villans. .
One, a werewolf. The other, a human.
Would you be able to someday make a sequel to all your books, putting the pack together? :D
| FantasyReader15 chapter 42 . 9/24/2011
-cries in a corner-
She didn't deserve to die! SHE DIDN'T DESERVE TO DIEEE! X_X
She could be part of the special 'The Keeping' law or something! She didn't DESERVE TO DIE! DX
So, the bad part of this chapter? Lucy Died. Great sex cannot bring a character back to life, sadly. Grr. Hopefully Lucy can linger in the world as a spirit and weres can hear here due to their 'animal spirits'. Hehe.
Good story though. ;)
| FantasyReader15 chapter 39 . 9/24/2011
For some reason, I keep on thinking that Mel has a cellphone and she hasn't realized it yet... I mean, they were CRAWLING in a sewer... and she forgot all about her 'wifi connection' in Stumpy River due to using the pay-phone.
| FantasyReader15 chapter 36 . 9/24/2011
Aldrich had it coming. Hehe. Go Greyson! ... besides the part that you tried to get werewolf information.
I loved Ryne and Melody's conversation. Now she realizes what is really happening. It also gives insight to the reader that she was in denial about it, but had thought about the possibility.
| FantasyReader15 chapter 21 . 9/23/2011
Enjoying the hints you shown. :D
Enjoying your author's note too. :D
But most of all, enjoying on how you made Ryne laying down on Melody's bed. :D
| FantasyReader15 chapter 20 . 9/23/2011
Okay, I am getting pretty sure (more and more) that her 'father' is wolf. It's just this tugging feeling... especially now you added the evidence. :P Maybe she can't transform, or doesn't know how yet?