Reviews for The Keeping
FantasyReader15 chapter 17 . 9/23/2011
Mel asked if she was stuck here, and yes she is. It didn't happen in real life? No? Well, you are inside a story, and therefore ... :D

LOL. I loved the ending. :) If Mel just opened her heart and accepted that she likes Ryne. :D
FantasyReader15 chapter 4 . 9/23/2011
Some serious stuff you written up.

Thanks for Elise and Kane's story every once in a while. I see how this story is going to be: COOL. :D

Also, Canada isn't that bad. People might stereotype, but some know better than that. It's also so very strange that I read a lot of Canadian works and love them. :D Must be in the genes and the food you eat.
FantasyReader15 chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
Oh how wrong she is. Lol.

Elise, I thought you knew better to speak about the pack and your mate outside. Go back home and do it! XD

Although, I love that Elise and Kane were included. Them having a baby is awesome!
FantasyReader15 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I finally decided to continue reading and go to Ryne's story. I do still miss Elise and Kane's story. :P But hey, this first chapter is already perking my interest.
shushumomo chapter 43 . 7/25/2011
This was just fantastic! It was funny, full of suspence lots of twists and it had a really sad moment.

Thank you so much for all the enjoyment you're giving us readers.

Best wishes
RedXButterflyXBlooming chapter 43 . 7/10/2011
AMAZING! That was a very good story idea! I loved Melody & Ryne (I think that's how you spell his name), they were another super cute couple! :)))) I also loved the story not only the love part, but it was very suspenseful and you had to figure out the mystery of the situation later on! I love stories like this! It definatly made me not to stop reading!
Binkybaby chapter 43 . 7/9/2011
loved it!
Non.graceful penname chapter 24 . 7/7/2011
Okay I enjoyed the first part to this series... I don't like this one though...

Its just not... Half as great as the other one. I'm sorry, I would have read it but you go on for so long and it's just boring to me...

But life goes on! You have a lot of reviews that will mostly read that they love your work and I'm your only disappointment!

I'll try to read this another time...
Reader chapter 22 . 6/30/2011
Don't mind those nonsense comments...they're not helping.

Either they're jealous or just want you to lose your momentum. I think most readers find it difficult to understand the term "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM".

I'll continue with the story..hehhe...
Brttny98 chapter 43 . 6/5/2011
Wow. That was a spectacular ending! I couldn't beleive it.

Really great job, I loved it so much :)
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 43 . 4/26/2011
Oh my goodness. That was amazing! I absolutely adore Ryne and Bryan. Daniel, well, he's cute too. :) I can't believe that Greyson was actually a good person. Who woulda thought? And, ew, Marla. What the he'll is she dong going for some forty year old creepy dude? I mean, I know you want money, but seriously? Gross! This was adorable. I cannot wait to start reading the third book.
KRYork chapter 43 . 4/25/2011
Ha ha I was thinking of her about five chapters nice job!

KRYork chapter 32 . 4/24/2011 didn't pull the emotion out of me, you ripped it and it has left my chest open and raw...

KRYork chapter 25 . 4/24/2011
Dun dun dun...

KRYork chapter 23 . 4/24/2011
So that would be too funny her application was was excepted...

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