wow this virus thing is so cool, it attacks the DNA of the host, its a really clever idea, how did you come up with it? Anyway, better keep reading :)

A really great story so far, can't wait to read more :)

Avery is a very likeable character. This story has potentional, update soon!

Hey there,

I think you're story line idea is decent. I didn't like a lot of your word choice and your word place, however, I liked how you gave backround information in dialog. It certainly has potential, but I think it needs more work.

This really is a good story, and I hope you update soon! :D

O_O Extinction of the human race? Well, THAT'S not good.

I noticed an error near the end of this chapter. 'Who's' should be 'whose'. But everything else looked great. :)

This is a very intriguing story. Avery seems like a cool character, and I like the fact that this is apparantly set far in the future. But I'm very curious about this 'syndrome', though...