|Reviews for The Baby|
| DragonOwl chapter 1 . 3/2
What!? WHAT HAPPENED!? I really did not see that coming! At first I wondered why he wasn't 100% happy, but now I see.
| Parker. Lily Parker chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I've read this one shot around 20 times since I first found it... and I still cry like a bitch every time. Words can't express how my heart breaks for this dude. In fact I've just realized thinking about this guy would be perfect if I was ever in a situation where I needed to fake-cry because I automatically tear up when I remember the ending.
I remember when I first read it I was so pissed at him. I could not understand how he (and his parents) could not be happy at the thought of having a baby with a woman he apparently loved, or at least why he didn't talk to her. Honestly I felt super bad for Lillian. Her characterization at the beginning made me feel like she was to nice and lovely of a person to be with someone like the guy. Then I got to the end and all I wanted to do was REPEATEDLY STAB THAT BITCH IN THE FACE WITH A DULL RUSTED SPOON. Violent I know, but it's all your fault for being such a great writer.
So thanks for sharing and sorry for the long review (I totally would write more but I need to go cry in the bathroom about the unfairness of life some more :P) that basically just said you're awesome and you're writing is awesome, even if it does the depress the crap out of people :).
| terabithias chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
That was so simple, yet so brilliant- the twist didn't occur to me at at all! somehow lovely and sad all at once; this read is going into my favorites for sure.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
This was really good! I was afraid that I wasn't going to like it, but I do. It's really good for being under 1000 words.
| Me D chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
i was not expecting that.
| kayla chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
this story gives me chills. I didn't pick up at the hints at all, and only realized the truth at the end. I read it again right after, and the hints were more noticeable. Fantastic story. The devotion is beautiful.
| my princess ending chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I am beyond speechless and I have no idea how to feel about this short story. It sounds like something I would do (marry the girl even though she cheated) that's why it affected me so much. I have no idea what kind of feedback I should give because I am so speechless therefore, my review shall end here.
| Mt chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Wow.. seriously amazing one shot. in 900 words, you had me curious (of his behaviour), happy (for Lillian), angry (at his parents, and then suddenly it all turned around! Nice job!
| I can't count past ten chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
omg omg omg you're amazing and brilliant and you've just taken all my feelings and ... there's not even a word for it. How are you so good and creative?
| Naomi chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
That was so good. Oh my god haha -speechless-
| Ney13 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Well, shoot. That really wasn't anything like I expected.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I meant "Holy Shit" as a compliment by the way.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
| stuck in bed chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Hi! Your story has been added over to the One-Shot category on A Drop Of Romeo. :) Here's your review:
The summary says it all. The story has a twist. And it's one that will leave you feeling breathless. With only 907 words, Miss Moo manages to create an impact at the end that will leave you gutted every single time. It makes you wonder if the man made the right decision after all - and if Lillian truly deserved him.
| CaseyBear chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Was not expecting that.
I loved it. I kind of want to know some background. I mean, DID SHE CHEAT? DID THEY PLAN IT THIS WAY? DOES SHE KNOW THAT HE CAN'T HAVE CHILDREN? I NEED TO KNOW.