Reviews for The Baby
Liz chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Holy crap! That was sad. Well written and dramatic, cutesy in a way, and so very heartbreaking well done. Never read anything like it!
CaitlinEA chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Why? Oh my gosh, are you serious?

She cheated? Lillian CHEATED?

And he STAYED with her?

Oh my gosh, that's so sad.

I'd be angry if I were his parents as well.

Thats so sad.
sunshinernnr chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I enjoyed this story a lot. I think you built up the mystery & suspense well. I thought his & his parents reactions were odd but the ending explained everything. I do wonder how many transgressions Lillian has had and why he did not confront her.
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