Reviews for Why?
Teresa Aitken chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
This is a great poem. The structure and phrasing made me feel as if I were spiraling down deeper and deeper into the individual’s pain, invoking an empathetic response. Great job!
Bradly chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
You do a good jog at portraying the hurt and sad feelings in this poem. It's like I can feel myself what the narator is trying to say. Good poem. :)