|Reviews for The Beginning|
| mirandakane chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I liked this.
| Paws4Suze chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Cool story! I know it's just a one-shot, but I wouldn't mind learning how Deana succeeds in the world. Your stories are really good, but it would be nice if you just cleaned up your stories with some editing. Other than that, great job!