Reviews for Afterlife
Rose Valentine chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Most promising haiku :)

Simply wonderful.
Flowingrivers chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Nice.
nickyO chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
The final line-'unknown fantasies"- caught my attention because it always seemed to me that it is so much easier to imagine what Hell would be like rather than to imagine what Heaven would be like. Although, I could say that there are many, many things/people I am grateful for and are quite Heaven like.

I guess, I just don't think about the big picture because that picture is simply too big and sublime/quiet/everyday. But pain and sorrow are very "loud" aspects of life so...Hm.

Good poem.