Reviews for Come With Me To My World
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
That's really dark and depressing. It's a really touching thing close to the heart to me - I can relate to it pretty well.

Well written, keep writing.
Reason-Flower chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Very depressing, which I imagine was the point. You should probably change the genre to 'angst', though. There were a few spelling mistake, but nothing major. Probably not the best poem I've ever read, but still a good one. Well done.