Reviews for Deaths's Wallow
Rockin-Ferrett chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
wow. This is probably my favorite. The personification was used well to create the tone of this piece.

The experience was very reliatable also, so I'm guessing this is something you felt...? Because I def felt something when I read it. Strong poem and strong description.

only criticism would probably be slight confusion because of either wording or the amount of things happening at once. But then again, that might just be me being silly. good job though. :D
LittleBlueOcean chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
I like this one. It flowed really nicely!
Misplaced Admiration chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Whoop! Yes! I was so excited when I saw you posted this! I love it! I could try and be properly critical like one is meant to whilst writing a review, but seriously, it's pure brilliance! I never quite got the hang of poem writing, but I tell you what, this is aweosme.

It's got such a smooth flow to it, all seems to fit really nicely. An interesting read, and it's got so much undercurrent! Brilliant.

You're awesome! Write! Write more!