Reviews for Two Years
WP chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I like it...we can feel the hurt, the emptiness...wondering when will it end.
Zoec chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
This piece has a nice flow to it, a sing song cadance. What i really liked (besides how well the rhyming scheme was) were the line in each paragraph. How they went, short-long-short-long. It went very well with the overall poem. Nicely done.
Utada Rumiko chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Postscript624 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
You might be better served writing this as prose piece.