|Reviews for Hurt|
| ivyfurl chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
...I remember reading this.
Why didn't I review this earlier?
I probably should have read this before the dialog between the two twins, eh? o-o
-mental note to reread that one-
Anyway - d'aw. This is cute.
I enjoy Edward's spluttering in front of a pretty girl.
Also... yay ;D I share the name of an albino psychopath.
I'M SO PROUD OF MYSELF.
But yeah, I really enjoyed this! Thanks for writing it.
| he ate my soul chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I like how you used the blunt, direct style, reminiscent of Anne of Green Gables in my mind.
I also liked how cute the story was, because I can totally visualize you cringing at the thought of this happening to you. The only comment I'd like to make is that it wasn't as intimately personal/emotional as your work usually is, so cringe-worthy descriptive language would make me a happy camper indefinitely
AND I LOVED HOW YOU PUT A IN THERE, AND HOW MUCH MIA'S LAST NAME SEEMS POLISH.
And just because I need to add my own sick (not so sick, in this case) humour in everything I write, I just wanted to say I used the word cockblock on a STATE essay xD