Reviews for Hurt
ivyfurl chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
...I remember reading this.

Why didn't I review this earlier?

I probably should have read this before the dialog between the two twins, eh? o-o

-mental note to reread that one-

Anyway - d'aw. This is cute.

I enjoy Edward's spluttering in front of a pretty girl.

Also... yay ;D I share the name of an albino psychopath.

I'M SO PROUD OF MYSELF.

-selfhug-

But yeah, I really enjoyed this! Thanks for writing it.

-Abby
he ate my soul chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I like how you used the blunt, direct style, reminiscent of Anne of Green Gables in my mind.

I also liked how cute the story was, because I can totally visualize you cringing at the thought of this happening to you. The only comment I'd like to make is that it wasn't as intimately personal/emotional as your work usually is, so cringe-worthy descriptive language would make me a happy camper indefinitely

AND I LOVED HOW YOU PUT A IN THERE, AND HOW MUCH MIA'S LAST NAME SEEMS POLISH.

And just because I need to add my own sick (not so sick, in this case) humour in everything I write, I just wanted to say I used the word cockblock on a STATE essay xD