Reviews for Your Name Became Engraved
Nick Ransom chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
...Damn.

"She shook unsteadily as she studied perfection. Their body was as magnificent as when she had left it, no, it had gotten better over time"

That

Is fucking beautiful.
BeautyIsDead chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I like how you've made some of your romance stories same sex, it doesn't make it terribly cliche but innovational, most stories, or the most that I've seen, are usual heterosexual and have the same plot, girl/guy having problems opposite girl/guy comes to the rescue, everyone lives happily ever after. Your stories are different, they're realistic and honest and different in the best way possible. Though some of the stories/poems I've read from you contain dark themes that only magnifies the uniqueness in it, this particular one was emotionally stimulating you've made it to where the reader feels the emotions Zooey feels, the numbness, the loneliness, the anxiety, the relief, they all coincide and I felt them all while I read it. I hope to see more of your writings soon.