Reviews for Oaken Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is a really good story! Its late but i wasnt vert tired so i tried lokin for a really good story and i found your story it was getting really intersting . Then it got to ur update and i was like Oh. My. F*. God. Im soo f* pissed at your keyboard lol... plz try to update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love ur story soo far.. gonn read more.. i feel i can connect to ruby .. seeing as im being called an ice-queen too.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter ;) Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry about your doggy ( I liked the chapter though ) and I shall always adore Ruby! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah hilarious and awesome chapter! keep it up :D and update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry about your dog :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's okay, thank you. Thank you also for at least telling us why you aren't updating. That is SO sad about your dog. I'm at the brink of crying from just hearing that. I am incredibly sorry :( I hope everything turns out okay, or if for some reason, he turns out oky and you don't have to kill him... ~* :D BeSt Of LuCk! :D *~ -EliteOne |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'could' think it should be called here. 'considered of a group' think it should be consisted here. 'out pf her face' think it should be of here, typo? hmm idk i've kinda always thought that showing instead of telling a reader about the appearance of characters would be better but i guess doing this for your story does set the stage for things to happen! so far i like ruby's sense of humour and i love that last paragraph. very nice ((: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. Im so sorry Hope you write again soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! They kiss! :D can't wait for the next chapter! update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You introduced another new thing (well most of the chapter was new, but whatever. With all this new stuff does this mean that this version will be longer, or that you will do a real sequel...hm, hm? *smiles and bounces up and down expectantly* |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT! :D KEEP WRITING! PLEASE! :D :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god! I totally love this story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story ;) I really think she should be a bit warmer to Robbie... But after being raped, maybe she needs a bit more time... :) Beverly |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! That was absolutely amazing, thank you a ton for letting us read this! Please continue! :D :) PleAsE! :) :D |