JEZE, her friends are just, retarded or something!

Who the hell does that? She could have told them on her own accord.

That's messed up.

Good chapter though(:

XD The Paris trip was the best part in the last story, and it's the best part now. I really get a kick out of her beating people up...is that wrong? Ah, whatever.

Oh, and this says it's a review for chapter one, but it's only because I reviewed chapter 8 when the old one was up (and you can't review the 'same' chapter twice)

Heehee I can't wait for the next chapter

*Ceci

ah what kind of friends are they? rude much...at least robbies a sweetheart :)

i only just realised that oaken hearts rhymes with BROKEN hearts! and i read the other one too! man i have problems...great story! :)

oh my word! thats horrible, i cant belive that happened to her! well i knid of guessed it would be something like that! i hope you update soon :)

I can't wait for them to be in Paris again! *does a little happy dance* I'm so excited D D

*Ceci

you should update faster, i love this story!

ah facebok drama : this chapter isnt bad what are you on about? keep updating, please :)

YAY! I was kinda unhappy that you got rid of the old one, so I was protesting by not reading it, but I finally did, and I like it even more than the other D It's more polished (the writing style and storyline, not the grammar and spelling and all that). I actually kind of like the "surprise", as you put it. But I'll have see how else it effects the plot to know for sure. D D D

I'm really happy now (-)

lol its really good :) i think i like ruby better this time. her personality just seems more...real? lols i dunno but its really good xx

oh i like this alot, im full on gutted that its only got four chapter : please please please update son! i love her ice queness and the fact that she has the abilty to ignore fittys like that, areas in which i fail. and im so flipping curouis to find out what hapened with dylan so please update son :D

Love the story so far, update soon!

dw she duznt seem like bella. phew. and in a way im glad ur writing it again just to make it different u kno? so far its really good. haha and i would have to agree with noriepie. wen i started reading i was like...have i missed something? but i like it. good job. hope to read the next chapter (really) soon :) xx

Ooh second story of yours that I like(:

Just to tell you, I'd read over chapter two and one for minor errors concerning spelling and stuff but that's it.

Anywho, I seriously love her icyness. It's awesome.

Wow I'm glad I came across this story. I'm really lovin what you have so

far. I love Ruby's personality it's icy but truthful.

P.S. I also happen to think Bella/Kirsten is a akward little twitcher too it's beyond annoying and is me does she stutter sometimes.