Reviews for The Cheerful Sacrifice
CaiaCaecilia chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I just wanted to let you know I thought 'The Cheerful Sacrifice' was really, really, good. I liked the use of imagery at the beginning, the food element worked really well with the tone and content of the chapter. I found the images of the sacrificial ribbon powerful and haunting, but I especially liked how her reasoning flowed at the end, showing her transition to a 'cheerful' sacrifice. Very well done, though I'll admit I hope December meets a kinder fate :)
LM4E chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Wow that was really good... :) I love the way you write. Usually people write incomplete thoughts or ramble on and on, but yours just flows. And what I really like about this story is that you can feel what November is feeling. I hate stories where you can't really understand what the narrator is going through, they all end up being one of those stories that you feel you've sort of wasted your life on :/

Well I never sign on Fictionpress anymore, so I signed on to review your story so please write more :)