Firstly, I adore this story. I'm glad she got her first crush.

Secondly, you should talk to your first crush. I missed out on telling guy how I was madly in like with him and all I've ever done since then is wonder and have them silly what if thoughts bounce around my head. So yeah just talk to him, comment on his status or something and keep the baby making for later ;).

Thirdly I love your story (I had to a thirdly or it wouldnt have sounded right) its just...perfect. Prefect chemistry, perfect guy and peefect plot!

This was awesome!

My favorite part had to be the end where Kam said, "Feel like going on a date with a Cake-eater?" and Elly said, "Feel like kissing a condom?" It was hillarious!

This was really, really good! Pure awesomeness! :)

~RockGuitar23

Hey hey, pretty good story and I LOVED the action! Thought it would be polite to review the reviewer and I'm glad I did 'cuz this one-shot was worth it. Keep up the good work! D

Angela

Hey! Long time not talk! So what's up? Hahaha :) Aw that was such a cute oneshot, hun! I want to get myself my own Kam XD lol

don't you just LOVE writing about people you know and then create this whole plot where everything you would love to happen happens instead of what really happened?

god, i think i just confused myself.

*dances like a crazy goon*

YAS! This is so damned fantastic! I love the ending! It's so beautiful and I've fallen totally for Kam. He's a wonderful little thing, I could just hug him. So me thinks you best get talking to "Kam" and make this ending happen girl, even if it's not quite this way :P It's so damned cute and goes by my favourite motto "they lived happily ever after"...

Great writing as always, bitch. I totally envy that :P