Reviews for War of Nerves |
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The Weatherwitch chapter 12 . 5/22/2010 this looks kinda interesting... please update soon! :D |
ViciouslyDark chapter 9 . 4/13/2010 hahaha!really-funny!loved-it! |
Adventure-of-Love chapter 8 . 4/8/2010 Yay :) not the best power but still Also, something up with Stephen? |
Nell09 chapter 5 . 4/2/2010 its really nice ! do update fast :) |
chinagurl chapter 2 . 3/27/2010 hmm this seems like a pretty cool story ] kinda like a backwards twilight thing? keep on writing it i think it might turn out to be very good ] |
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 3/26/2010 Awesome so far! Especially like the line 'I like those dreams. Too bad they're just dreams.' Very nice. Can't wait to read more! ~HPRK |
AnneCatherine chapter 1 . 3/26/2010 Hi I've just finished reading the prologue of 'War of Nerves' and quite liked it. I'm intrigued as to what kind of creature she is and the whole moving around/keeping secrets idea has a lot of potential plot-wise. The flow was good throughout, but with sentences like "Consequences? What do you me-*yawn*" I think it would be more professional to put something like "Consequences? What do you me-" Sam tried to ask, but, yawning, didn't quite get there. i.e., write the sentence. Look forward to finding out more :) |