this looks kinda interesting...

please update soon! :D

hahaha!really-funny!loved-it!

Yay :) not the best power but still

Also, something up with Stephen?

its really nice ! do update fast :)

hmm this seems like a pretty cool story ] kinda like a backwards twilight thing? keep on writing it i think it might turn out to be very good ]

Awesome so far!

Especially like the line 'I like those dreams. Too bad they're just dreams.' Very nice.

Can't wait to read more!

~HPRK

Hi I've just finished reading the prologue of 'War of Nerves' and quite liked it. I'm intrigued as to what kind of creature she is and the whole moving around/keeping secrets idea has a lot of potential plot-wise. The flow was good throughout, but with sentences like "Consequences? What do you me-*yawn*" I think it would be more professional to put something like "Consequences? What do you me-" Sam tried to ask, but, yawning, didn't quite get there. i.e., write the sentence. Look forward to finding out more :)