Reviews for Savings & Loan
SingViolence chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Interesting, captures what love truly is, knowing that the person has the ability to hurt you, and letting them. Very good, thank you for writing
Punslinger chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
I like the format of this poem. My eyes moving back and forth across the page makes me feel the jerky uncertainty of the narrator's emotions, until the last line provides a satisfactory resolution. Well written and keenly focused.