Reviews for Future Dreams
Jeremy R Walker chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Interesting premise and twist on a Ghost story I love it
MaddersAhatter chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Very original idea!

But then that is your trademark - you have a novel way of looking at the world and it comes across.

Loved it.

Nicely done.
duckylamour chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
This story moved along nicely and kept my attention. Very real and drew me in. It was taut and believable. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your work.
Lydecker Jr chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed the change of time through the little girl's eyes. Her thought process was interesting and within reason. I am not an expert in language but, from the era the story hinted the girl originated from her diction seemed appropriate to me. I especially like the way you ended it.

"I was so tired I faded away at that point, and woke up here in the sunshine this morning."