Reviews for A Rose for Rebecca Bernstein
Kildosad chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This is so sad yet touching! :')
GatesOfGold chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Well, that was depressing. *sob*
dbz 77 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
This was an interesting short story. I liked how you described the narrator's feelings, and I liked the comparison to the centurion during Christ's crucifixion.
Outlaw's Daughter chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Tragic, beautiful, and moving. I like the comparison to Pilate and Christ.
AtiyaMonae chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Moving.

Honestly, this is so beautiful. The description and the emotions painted in it were so vivid.

Amazing. ")

xx
Ancolie chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I loved this. It was heartbreaking, but I think you did an amazing job humanizing the young Nazi. A very interesting and well written piece. :)
sophoes chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
I think this is written really well :) Personally I don't have a problem with the Haulocaust theme, I thought it was really powerful and effective, and i have to say i love the bit whrre he leaves a rose for her :P

x
Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Amazingly descriptive and well-written. I didn't enjoy it, particularly because I don't like the genre/s you've used.

I only have one other issue, where you've written "I wept into myself". I don't entirely understand what that means or what you're trying to say.

Other than that and my personal genre issues, it was a good piece :)