greatest story ever

I love this story! Its very good(: i like how chapters not short but not long. Very eventful(: and chapters have lots going on 사랑 3 ㅋㅋ

Awsome story, i love all of your stories. Are you still updating this?

Wow... So many chapters!

I havent read this in a while but im back!

Poor Colby! What?... He's growing on me!

:P Keep writing!

I really hope you finish. When I first started this I was like, "How the hell am I gonna read 98 chapters?" But I couldn't stop. I read it in like a day in a half. I love these characters almost as much I love the Band Geeks. Lol Hope you finish writing it.

I live Dalton & Gavin together they seem right for one another. I hope Dax gets his happy ending. BTW I agree with you on your "rant" if the language was too much then they can stop reading. I myself have a potty mouth so it was like reading how me and my friends talk. Lol

PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE!

such a good story :) i couldnt stop reading it i loved it :) it was the best one that i have read yet i loved how it was written and cant wait to read more i would like you to finish it like i would like to read and find out who that guy that took her was and i want something to happen between them haha and colby and fish have to talk they need to talk and reconnect as one again before they get married.. :) !

Okay, I started reading this a couple of days ago. I almost died when I realized it had 98 chapters up to this point and it wasn't finished yet! And you've been writing it for like over a year and a half! I wasn't paying attention when I started to read it, because I probably wouldn't have started it if I had realized that. However, I have come to love these characters so much. I really want to find out who is doing those horrible things to her. I really don't have a clue. I love the humor interspersed into the story and really want all of the main characters to find happiness with each other. Beth and Dax. Gavin and Dalton. Please don't keep this going for another year, and update it soon!

I have just finished this chapter and I am really enjoying this story. I love the characters and feel that you have done a great job at descriptions. I can't wait for the next update, I appreciate authors for their imagination and also for the courage to be able to put their thoughts to print.

I am absolutely loving this story the detail you go into with the fight scenes and they're lives is fantastic and the little funny bits you put in have me laughing as well. Well done and well written.

Hey there! I've read a bunch of your stories, and you've got such a great imagination and your plots are so good! You really develop your characters and whatnot.

However, I think that you need to work on keeping your main characters realistic at points. A lot of the time, you seem to depict like, every guy in the entire story being in love with the main character, or everyone thinking that the main character is flawless and hot.

Sometimes, they come across and whiny and unreasonable, and somehow everyone in the story is okay with that?

As I said, I like your plots and whatnot, but I think you need to work on making the people in your stories a little more realistic.

Oh, one more thing; in this story at Christmas, they all buy each other gifts. They just hand over designer goods like Chanel and Gucci and Prada bags and custom designed surf boards. When I read this I was like, "Are they freaking made of money?"

I don't want you to take only from this the negative. I think that you should definitely keep on writing, but there's always room for improvement and I'm just trying to help you do that!

Hey, I'm just happy your updating again

I really love this story... I do, however, wish the chapters were longer... it's kind of sucks to wait and wait for an update, get excited when it comes, then have it done in 5 minutes... while I love the story, the plot, the characters, all of it, that is my only issue.

Keep up the good work! Thanks :-)

Pls update soon absoulty love it read it all in less den 2 days it's awesome!

love love love alllll your stories, especially this one! keep writing pleaaaase!

They are so cute. I started this story (reading) way back on Quizilla. Wow time flies :)