Hey! Read it. Awesome story, loving the story line. I was just thinking, do you know about beta readers? There are some really good beta readers that could make your story ever better. I read the other reviews and they're nice. Well done, loved it. It was humorous and quirky. Keep up the good work! x

Definitely interesting. But the problem is that the paragraphing is wrong, making it quite painful to read. But I like the story line- definitely interesting and I will definitely read more.

x,

Lyra

It's really good

But it can be a bit confusing at parts, it might be better

if you spaced it out a bit more.

but still I really like it.