Reviews for karma ii
nickyO chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
very good image for your topic, close to perfect even
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
The imagery you created with the short hakiu was wonderful. Nice work!
The Patsy Dragon chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
I really liked this one. Especially with the last line... I like the simple image this poem gives.

I have to wonder, though. Is it the coat that is long gone, or the reader? I guess it could be both, the way it's worded. :)

Great job. :D
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
ja, da sieht man gut Ursache und Wirkung, endrucksvoll, dass der Einfluß des Mantels länger anhält als seine Existenz