|Reviews for the Quest|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Energetic and glum. Growing up indeed :)
I hope the needle neither gets lost nor caught.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
love it, that end line has weight in that it makes one think of a headstone and death and thus makes the rest of the poem about the journey of life and the water is the environment we often cannot control. Good work.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
eine ganze Welt in der kleinen Nadel, ein sehr schönes Haiku
| mormonboy chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
I really like it.