|Reviews for The Key|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
"hard to find , hard to keep"... find, hard
"Must work hard and be true to thyself".. I didn't like thyself. I'm not sure if you're using it correctly and I don't get why you would use it since the rest of the poem isn't in Old English.
I think you used a lot of words over and over like trust and true and soul and love. I think it would be less predictable and more varied if you found some synonyms. I also think this piece could use some punctuation because I found it hard to follow the phrases as times.
The peice is cute though. A very sweet point of view on love that most can relate to.
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| Yusuf chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Pleasant and incredibly sweet. Glad to see you're posting again.
| Broken-Angel-1994 chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Aw, this one's sweet!