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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello again i would like to say this isnt your best chapter soo far .. i think now that the abuse and begging things have gone its less intersting, i like the parts where she got sent to hospital and their little moments. :) Your crazy stalkers person Becca x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome chapter thanks for reviewing i hope they both remember soon :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok... WOW ! i really hope they all remember (im guessing they do) and hope they have a happy ending :) That was a awesome chapter thanks for mentioning me, i review because i love your story so much i cant wait to see what happens next .. Epic .. sorry if i start to get annoying reviewing all the time :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Hey ! Me again :D i swear to god i am in love with your story its EPIC ! but whhy thhee cliffhanggeerr :'( . I hope this will speed the process of updating soon ;) BYYE ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best story ever i almost cried when i saw u updated again ;) i love this chapter glad Jake finally found out x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still adore this story but you take ages to upload the story :( |
![]() ![]() where's the rest of it |
![]() ![]() This...is...so...freaking awesome! And the plot, the entire new reading-minds thing, the Alice and the Jake! You are one awesome writer, dude! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited to see what happens next. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I loves this chapter in fact I LOVE THE WHOLE BOOK ! i cant wait to find out what jake will do when he founds out about her uncle and aunt hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you posted again. I missed you. I love this chapter. I love that Jake thinks he's doing what best but I really hope he helps her out soon. She can't take much more. Please update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I love it! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I'll be waiting for the next update! |
![]() ![]() I love this story and what is with Bree? i wonder y Alice and Jake r having the similar dreams and who this nameless person is! I also think that Alice has this secret power that is the most powerful so far. I can't wait for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahaha this chapter is really good. but towards the ending...was Jake dreaming? or was he hearing/seeing Alice dream? |