Leon is dead a creep from the start . Why nobody that reviewed noticed that?

This was just awesome.

What a sweet story :) I loooveee Shawn. He's so cute. I loved the story and hope you continue.

On a more critical note, there were some grammar mistakes and sentence errors that threw me off but other than that two thumbs up.

Loved all :) you're (and your friend?) talented as hell. This couldve been a tv show or sth. reaaly liked it chica ;)

now get up, be nice person, write a new one like this and enlighten my life..

Just kidding...

Hey, readers! If you are reading this reviews just to make sure the story is good or not, it is. and when you are finished, thank me ;D

and adore the author..

Love this chap. like all the others. Especially this one cuz my name is Raven too. Keep making stories(:

great story well done can't wait for your next story.:)

LOL i love this . i love the sexual chemistry thing they had going on ! so cute.

oh my gosh! i love this book! it's so good! cannot wait to see how the other one goes! loved reading this, fully got adicted to it!

xx

E.M

Mayday Parade is the shit. Greatest band ever.

This was beautiful. Why the hell does it only have 90 sumfin reviews? I swear, people today don't know good work. Bunch of bloody idiots, they are.

Kudos

$*Aradia Cloud*$

Oh god. I honestly thought that Shawn was gonna die. I already had my "pissed off" speech ready for you.

I was supposed to say this like... three chapter ago. I think that her mom is the other accomplice that the murderer has. I'm just spewing ideas here, so give me break if I'm wrong.

They should just jump each other. Everyone (including myself) would be THAT much happier.

Berrybest story! lolz

I HAV A QUESTION WHATS UP WITH THE LEON GUY?