Reviews for Dystopian Paradise
Guest chapter 8 . 7/12/2019
Did Roxanne just touch Mod and nothing happened?
annabanana1994 chapter 7 . 7/12/2019
I really like this story... but honestly, I would like to know more about how the world is... what happened to humans, are they all slaves now?
Also, I don't think Roxanne's behavior is completely normal... shouldn't she want to go back to her life as it was before being kidnapped? Shouldn't she try to find out everything that she missed? She seems so chill and accepting of her situation and the people around her...

I know it's been years since you last updated but if you ever come back I hope you see this and improve your story...
annabanana1994 chapter 8 . 7/8/2016
I love this story! please keep it going!
forgottenchangeling chapter 8 . 2/1/2013
More please.
Kari-Morizaki chapter 8 . 11/21/2011
I like the story so far, some things are a bit sudden for my taste but the mystery keeps me reading.
cherry5 chapter 8 . 6/12/2011
I am definitely on team Mod right now. Leo is such a jerk, and he still makes Roxi call him master. I think if he really cared for her, he wouldn't be such a creep to her (buying her lingerie, watching her when she baths, etc) Mod definitely cares for her, even though he doesn't really know her yet. He avoids her because he cares for her. That's sweet. But i'm curious... Is Mod a vampire too? Or is he a werewolf? Maybe a demon?
Devilish Kisses chapter 8 . 6/5/2011
Ha ha, yeah, I want more Leo/Roxi!
Devilish Kisses chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
Ha ha, I love Parker :P
Devilish Kisses chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Aw, Shadow seems sweet!
Devilish Kisses chapter 5 . 6/4/2011
Insight into Leonardo's life-nice! I love the bathroom lol
Devilish Kisses chapter 4 . 6/4/2011
I like the twist-the fact that vampires and werewolves appear to not be enemies. Melissa seems interesting, but bloodsucker? Referring to Mod and Leonardo?
Devilish Kisses chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
Oh, wow! I wonder what Mod'll do...
Devilish Kisses chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Leonardo seems...surprisingly gentle! And, what the hell did Mod do?
darkgurl92 chapter 8 . 6/4/2011
Team LEo or Mod...hmmm hard choice right now but am leaning towards team Leo.. Hopefully the end up together, but what is the deal with mod?

Update soon :)
Devilish Kisses chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Oh my god, I love it!
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