Reviews for One Night
tsk tsk tsk chapter 1 . 7/6
This shit is racist and affects African Americans and Australians equally. it demeans woman and supports rape, and it it repulsive. stop using white privilege and fucking delete this snobby trash. other than those things though, its good.
Maddy chapter 1 . 1/2
Loved it I want more
CityFighter88 chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
Very erotic and interesting story. The details were raw and I really liked the second person form. It really excited me. I am definitely going to read the rest of your works.
MDC chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
Lots of grammar mistakes and the story goes a bit too quickly, but otherwise very hot and a great story.
Buttbubbles chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
That's second person.
MnM7 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
It's really good. You have a few grammar mistakes like when you say 'ars' instead of 'ass' or 'arse' but otherwise it's great :)
merecedeslove chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
That's was really good story. Just the way it just kept going and going. The way you have the points of view kinda changes but I get what you mean.