Reviews for One Night
Maddy chapter 1 . 1/2
Loved it I want more
CityFighter88 chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
Very erotic and interesting story. The details were raw and I really liked the second person form. It really excited me. I am definitely going to read the rest of your works.
MDC chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
Lots of grammar mistakes and the story goes a bit too quickly, but otherwise very hot and a great story.
Buttbubbles chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
That's second person.
MnM7 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
It's really good. You have a few grammar mistakes like when you say 'ars' instead of 'ass' or 'arse' but otherwise it's great :)
merecedeslove chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
That's was really good story. Just the way it just kept going and going. The way you have the points of view kinda changes but I get what you mean.