Reviews for BE NICE
melodyrose9 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Oh my gosh Brilliance! Brilliance! I love twinkies and this poem!
irish-ileana chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Haha, that was really cute. BE NICE SO YOU DON'T GET LICE.

I may make that my MSN name.

The only thing I have to say for this is that although it's meant to be short and sweet, you could try adding a bit of structure. It comes off a bit like a few random thought fragments put together. Still, I like the thought(s) behind this and I think it has potential.
Bradly chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I like it. It's simple direct and too the point. Plus you added a little comedy to it with the lice comment. Good poem. :)
nickyO chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
lol. :) cute.
fkdjlfikd chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Lol, this is so funny and cute. This is so true. Everything we do in life affects other people and we never seem to realize this. Plus karma is always a bitch, which is why I love the "be nice so you don't get lice" part, brilliant!
sealednectar chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
haha, this is funny and truthful. good work.