Reviews for The Lobe of your Lampshade
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
"of it's shade shyly"... its.

Short and powerful. I like the description with body parts like teeth and eyeballs. It worked well to connect the two stanzas. The oriental references were interesting as well. Nice job.

Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile).
Mirabella chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Awesome little concept encapsulated in this!
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
great describtion and word usage.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
The language flows well in this poem. Awesome imagery.

Just one thing:

{of it's shade shyly} its.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 3/31/2010

You just never disappoint, do you? The proof here is that you can transform just about the most mundane of observations into something gorgeous and thought-provoking. Beautiful.
Cloverless chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
"the light cometh / like a God".

You win the internet.

There is nothing more to say.