Reviews for Fish Out of Water: American Merfolk
ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
I love the way you use the sardonic narrative. This was intriguing and just confusing enough to keep the reader along for the ride.

There were a few spelling errors, but nothing too big.

Well done!
TheRedWulfe chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I love this! Your imagry realy helps set the scene and Spider. If you stop writing, I will have to kill you, there is real potential here!

Oh, and you might want to check for missing words the six paragraph from the bottom.